手把手教你写长难句

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长难句之殇

不要以为长难句只停留在阅读文章当中,其实它们也可以出现在你的作文中~ 只要你胆大心细放得开!


   在高考难度以上的阅读考试中长难句可谓是一个老大难问题,但总有些同学能经过自己的坚(bei)持(bi)不(wu)懈(nai)达到了阅读无障碍,眼睛自带从句识别器和关系词定位器。然而有追求卓越的同学会常常想:我看得懂的长难句咋自己就写不出来呢?

   今天我们就读一个句子、分析两种语法结构,写一个长难句。例句来了:


It has long been known that the sea otters living along the West Coast of North America help keep kelp forests in their habitat healthy and vital.


 这个句子并没有长到天荒地老,但想要写出这么长的句子就……咳咳……

其实并不困难,只要我们先分析清楚句子当中的语法结构,按照同样的逻辑,写一个类似的不成问题~


句型分析

   先来断句,"It has long been known that……” 是个很容易被误解为宾语从句(不是所有动词后的从句都是宾语从句)的主语从句

   “the sea otters living along the West Coast of North America help keep kelp forests in their habitat healthy and vital ”中的主句是the sea otters help keep kelp forests in their habitat healthy and vital,包含一个做定语的现在分词结构 living along the West Coast of North America,之所以用现在分词是因为sea otters 与live是主动关系。(插播:如果是被动关系则用done的形式,eg. sea otter killed by the ocean pollution)


认真模仿

   理清了句子结构,我们可以模仿的长难句句型也就出现了: It is…that(主语从句)sth/ sb doing/done(分词做后置定语)do sth

   具体练习的时候我们可以套用在很多题目当中,或者自己的写作练习中。下面我们举几个栗子:


【共享单车之争】It is a rumor that the ofo company offering shared bikes in 33 cities will be bought by Mobike.


【变形金刚5首发影评】It can hardly be argued that the Transformers: The Last Knight directed by Michael Bay will remind the after 80s audience's memories of childhood.


【托福-政府是否应该支持太空探索】It will be definitely true that the space exploration representing the highest level of technology of a country will promot the international cooperation in the long term.

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