英语二 2011年
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Directions:
Suppose your cousin Li Ming has just been admitted to a university. Write him/her a letter to:
1) congratulate him/her, and
2) give him/her suggestions on how to get prepared for university life.
You should write about 100 words on the ANSWER SHEET.
Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use "Zhang Wei" instead.
Do not write your address. (10 points)
真题点评
这是一封祝贺信。一般情况下,祝贺信的内容不应只包含祝福语,题目中也要求考生在信件中提及一些忠告(过来人对新人说的话)。读大学是机遇也是挑战,考生可以分几点来细说大一新生应该注意哪些事项,应该做什么以及最好不要做什么。考生只要控制好篇幅,一般就可以轻松搞定这篇书信作文。
高分范文
Dear Li Ming,
Congratulate you on your being admitted to ** University. You know it is one of the most popular and competitive universities in our country. You must be very proud.
But then, university life is quite different from life in high school. It is more challenging both in your academic achievement and in interpersonal relationships. Also, it provides you with the chance to experience the kind of real life that you will face right after graduation. So make good use of the next four years; then you will be an excellent job applicant and an agreeable colleague.
If you have any questions about college life, write to me as soon as possible.
Yours truly,
Zhang Wei
参考译文
亲爱的李明:
祝贺你被录取到 **大学。你知道,这是我们国家最受欢迎也最有竞争力的大学之一。你一定感到非常自豪吧。
但是,大学生活与高中生活有很大的不同。无论从学术成就还是从人际关系来说,大学生活都更具挑战性。此外,它给你提供了一个体验真正的生活的机会,而这样的生活是你在毕业之后马上就将面对的。所以好好利用未来四年吧,然后你就会成为一个优秀的求职者和一个讨人喜欢的同事。
如果你有任何关于大学生活的问题,尽快给我写信吧。
此致
敬礼!
张伟
好词好组
applicant n. 申请人
(尤指提交正式书面申请的求职或求学的人)
agreeable adj.亲切的;友善的;讨人喜欢的
interpersonal relationship:人际关系
make good use of:好好利用;充分利用